DPS - Draft 3

I have added a puff onto the corner and I think that it fills the space well. I have also changed the image as it now looks more suitable to the TA.

To finalise this page, I am going to proof read my spelling and adjust the layout slightly.

DPS - Draft 2

As a result of my previous draft looking dull, I have incorporated red which also follows my house style.
However, the page looks unfinished so I will need to either change the layout or add a puff to the right hand side to fill the space.
I will also need to sort out the blue text as it looks random and misplaced.

DPS - Draft 1

This is the finished first draft of my DPS. I think that although I like the image, it makes the page look dull.
Also, I am going to need to add something onto the right hand side as it is bare and looks very basic.

Contents Page - Draft 2

This is the second draft of my contents page, I have added found images which makes it look professional.
I still need to add page numbers and then recreate this with images of my own.
Alongside this, I will change the cover stories on my front cover so that they match.
I have tried to incorporate red into this draft so that synergy is created throughout my magazine.

Contents Page - Draft 1

This is the first draft of my contents page.
I used found images so that I could compare my magazine to ones already made like 'Q' and 'NME'. I will then try to recreate this when I am at the final stages of production.

Front Cover - Draft 3

This is draft 3 of my front cover. It is nearly finished, however, I need to check my spelling and write the details about the cover stories.
I do not think my masthead looks right so I am going to change this so it fits better on the page.
I also need to add the barcode, QR code and price.

Front Cover - Draft 2

This is my second draft for my front cover. I have tried to incorporate another colour - red - so that it would not look too dark on a shelf. However, the cover story about SFNH still looks basic so this will need improving.

Front Cover - draft 1

This was the first draft of my front cover, although one image was missing as that photo shoot took place after this draft was saved.

I think that the models were too small on the front cover meaning that they did not have a major impact on the audience, which would not suit the TA at all. Also, the colours on this page were all dark meaning that it looked dull and no bright or vibrant colours would attract the attention of the readers/audience.

Also, the glow around the word "Exclusive" looks unprofessional and very basic, it does not look advanced enough as of yet to be worth the price of £3.45.

Photoshoot Plan 2

I am going to take a few images of another model, Sarah Tear, at a chicken farm. This location was chosen in my survey and although I do not think it will look very appealing to the audience, I have to take in to consideration the things that my TA want to see in my magazine.

Date: Unknown, it shall be taken when both of us are free as the chicken farm is close to out Sixth Form College.
Location: Chicken farm, Brigg.
Props: None
Costume: Casual, black jeans and a coat as the image will be taken outdoors.
Make up: Casual everyday make up.